文章不厌百回改,千磨万砺始成金。鲁迅说:“写完之后至少看两遍,竭力将可有可无的字、句、段删去,毫不可惜”(“答北斗杂志社问”)。这些宝贵的经验之谈,对于我们如何写出好文章,尤其是如何修改文章具有指导意义。本文以中学语文课本里的鲁迅名篇为例,通过手稿(原稿)和发表稿(定稿)的比较对照,来直观地“看看”鲁迅是如何进行精益求精的语言修改的。 The article is not tired of reform, thousands of millions began to become gold. Lu Xun said: “After reading at least twice, trying to be dispensable words, sentences, paragraph delete, no regret ” ( “Compass magazine”). These valuable experiences talk about how we can write a good article, especially how to modify the article. This article takes the famous texts of Lu Xun in middle school as an example, and through the comparison of manuscripts (manuscripts) and published manuscripts (manuscripts), we can intuitively “see” how Lu Xun amended the language of excellence.