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Safety is very important to everyone， especially teenagers. As students， we should learn to keep ourselves safe all the time. What should we do？ Here are some advices.
First， we should keep safe at home. If we stay at home alone， we shouldn’t open the door for the strangers， and we mustn’t play fire at home， because it’s very dangerous. Second， when we are in the school， we must obey school rules. When we go downstairs， we must walk in line slowly， and when we found someone push us from back， we must stop at once. Third， when we are in the public places， we should also pay attention to the people around us. We’d better not go to the places where there are too many people or go out alone at night. When we are in danger， we must call police at once. Besides， we should keep safe on the road， follow the traffic rules， you will be safe all the time.
In a word， keeping safe is very important， we should know how to protect ourselves .And be safe， be happy！
【简评】青少年的安全问题是当今社会广泛关注的一个话题。这篇作文，小作者能从多方面进行分析表达自己的观点，可以看得出每一个选材都是经过思考的，中心思想把握很准确。但在词汇的选择和应用上略显单一，可不断积累和拓展，注重一些典型词汇的运用，使表达更加完善。
指导教师：郝欣欣
First， we should keep safe at home. If we stay at home alone， we shouldn’t open the door for the strangers， and we mustn’t play fire at home， because it’s very dangerous. Second， when we are in the school， we must obey school rules. When we go downstairs， we must walk in line slowly， and when we found someone push us from back， we must stop at once. Third， when we are in the public places， we should also pay attention to the people around us. We’d better not go to the places where there are too many people or go out alone at night. When we are in danger， we must call police at once. Besides， we should keep safe on the road， follow the traffic rules， you will be safe all the time.
In a word， keeping safe is very important， we should know how to protect ourselves .And be safe， be happy！
【简评】青少年的安全问题是当今社会广泛关注的一个话题。这篇作文，小作者能从多方面进行分析表达自己的观点，可以看得出每一个选材都是经过思考的，中心思想把握很准确。但在词汇的选择和应用上略显单一，可不断积累和拓展，注重一些典型词汇的运用，使表达更加完善。
指导教师：郝欣欣