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写文章应该放得开、收得拢。所谓放得开,就是要思路开阔,想像丰富,选材广泛,不拘泥于眼前的、平常的生活小事,也不拘泥于事情本身就事论事;所谓收得拢,就是所用的材料看起来很散很杂,但实际上它始终有一根线贯穿着、统辖着,文章的思路是清晰的,立意是深厚的。只有这样的作文,才能给人以不同的感受。让人产生联想,才是大度、有才气的表现。可是,在中学生的作文中,有不少习作小气得很,写来写去,总是那么一点点事,写得既不广,也不新,非常拘谨、局促,像一块没有发酵好的僵心面包,读起来让人觉得索然无味。下面这篇习作就是这样——
Writing articles should be open and closed. The so-called openness is to broaden our horizons, to imagine a wide range of materials, to select a wide range of materials, not to stick to the immediate, ordinary life, and not to limit ourselves to matters. The so-called collection is that the materials used are very scattered. However, in fact, it always has a thread running through it and governs it. The idea of the article is clear and the concept is profound. Only such composition can give people different feelings. Let people associate, it is a generous, talented performance. However, in the middle school students’ writings, there are quite a few students who are stingy. Writing and writing are always a little bit of a thing. They are neither extensive nor new. They are very cautious and cramped, like a piece of frozen food. The heart of bread, read it makes people feel uninteresting. Here’s what this exercise is like-