离学生更近些──下水作文的几点体会湖南省株洲市二中张坚固中学时我就爱作文，尤其爱听作文讲评课。后来才懂得，老师的讲评其实是他自己的再创作，但记忆最深的是老师自身的一次下水作文，写的是师生同去下乡秋收的一段生活感受。老师的文章自然比我们高，可我正是从那... Closer to students: A few experiences with Xie Shui’s composition When I experienced Zhang Chengzhong Middle School in Erzhong Middle School, Zhuzhou City, Hunan Province, I loved writing, especially listening to composition lectures. Only later learned that the teacher’s commentary was actually his own re-creation, but the deepest memory was the teacher’s own essay and wrote a section of the teacher’s life experience with the autumn harvest. The teacher’s article is naturally higher than us, but I was from that...