在小学作文中,场面描写是最令同学们感到头痛的。很多同学在描写场面时,要么是抽象概括地用几个形容词一笔带过,要么是面面俱到,如蜻蜒点水一样没有重点。还有的同学,把场面描写同景物描写混同起来,描绘的只是一定环境中景物的位置、状态和外貌,而不是一定环境中的各种活动。 In elementary school essay, scene description is the most troubling students. Many students in the description of the scene, either abstract summed up with a few adjectives carried over, or it is exhaustive, as did dragonfly point of no focus. Still other students, confusing scene description with description of scenery, depict only the location, state and appearance of the scenery in a certain environment, not all kinds of activities in a certain environment.