“注意详略”,是小学高年级作文训练中的一个重点项目。教法固然很多,但归结起来,不外乎这样两类:一是孤立进行,教师讲解有关知识,学生完成这一练习;一是整体考虑,既把握重点项目,又进行综合训练,使学生在完成这一重点项目训练的同时,得到多种能力的锻炼。我采用了后一种教法。首先,我选择了学校附近的水泥预制厂作为采访对象,配合“祖国在前进”的征文活动,让学生写一篇参观记。上作文指导课之前,我组织学生进行了这样一些活动: 1.访:师生参观了该厂的每个车间, “Attention to detail” is a key project in the composition training of upper-grade primary school. Although there are a lot of teaching methods, they can be summed up in two ways: first, they are conducted in isolation and the teachers explain the relevant knowledge; students complete the exercise; first, they consider both the key projects and the integrated training so that students Completion of this key project training at the same time, get a variety of ability to exercise. I adopted the latter method. First of all, I chose the cement prefab plant near the school as an interviewee, with the essay activity of “Motherland Going Forward”, so that students can write a note of visit. On the composition guidance class, I organized the students to carry out such activities: 1. Interview: teachers and students visited each workshop of the plant,