师:写游记如何安排“顺序”呢?生:我认为要按一定的游览顺序写清游览的过程。生:我觉得动笔时要注意详略得当,不记“流水账”。师:是的,我们在游览、参观中往往看到的东西是很多的,听到的事情也不少,是不是都要记下来写到文章里去呢?不。什么都写,结果什么也写不好。写游记最容易犯的毛病,就是记“流水账”。生:常见的“顺序”有哪些呢?师:第一种,就是以自己的行踪为序。也就是常说的移步换景,即随着作者立足点的移动,观察的对象或者同一对象观察的角度、距离也在不断变化。生:立足的某一点,就是“固定观察点”了。我们可以按远近高低的顺序描写景物。也就是常说的定点换景,即看同一景物,以作者的立足点或方位作为固定点,随 Teacher: How to write a travelogue “Order ” Health ?: I think that according to a certain tour order to clear the tour process. Students: I think when you write should pay attention to detailed and appropriate, do not remember “running account ”. Teacher: Yes, we often see things during our tours and visits. We hear a lot of things. Do you have to write down and write down the essay? Write everything, the results of what to write bad. Travel is the most likely to make mistakes, is to remember “running account ”. Students: Common “Order ” What? Teacher: The first is to order their own whereabouts. It is often said that the step-by-step landscape, that is, with the author’s foothold movement, the observed object or the same object from the perspective of the distance is also changing. Health: a foothold is “fixed observation point” of the. We can describe the landscape in descending order. It is often said that the site change, that is to see the same scene, with the author’s foothold or position as a fixed point, with