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Don’t you think it is really interesting to travel with our family？ Among all the ways of travelling， I like taking a train best. Last week， I had a chance to visit Dalian with my parents by train. It is a fantastic journey.
That was a sunny day. Happily， I got on the train to Dalian. It was really interesting to travel by train. There were so many interesting things to look at outside the window the sea， the mountains and many patches of green. What a beautiful picture！I made a friend with a girl in the train. We have the same hobby， reading books. And we talked a lot about books， which made the journey full of laugh and happiness. With a sleeper ticket， I slept in a bed at night and had a sweet dream. How time flies！ Shortly after waking up， we arrived in Dalian. Indeed， I spent a happy and unforgettable time in the train.
What an interesting journey！ I’ll never forget it.
【简评】本文描述了一次难忘的火车之旅，全文洋溢着欢快的气氛。这种快乐的感情通过对天气、景色和活动的描写表现出来。小作者运用了多样的句式，如感叹句、反问句等，并将长短句结合使用，使文章更加具有可读性。文章段落清晰，结构合理，展示了小作者的英语写作功底。
That was a sunny day. Happily， I got on the train to Dalian. It was really interesting to travel by train. There were so many interesting things to look at outside the window the sea， the mountains and many patches of green. What a beautiful picture！I made a friend with a girl in the train. We have the same hobby， reading books. And we talked a lot about books， which made the journey full of laugh and happiness. With a sleeper ticket， I slept in a bed at night and had a sweet dream. How time flies！ Shortly after waking up， we arrived in Dalian. Indeed， I spent a happy and unforgettable time in the train.
What an interesting journey！ I’ll never forget it.
【简评】本文描述了一次难忘的火车之旅，全文洋溢着欢快的气氛。这种快乐的感情通过对天气、景色和活动的描写表现出来。小作者运用了多样的句式，如感叹句、反问句等，并将长短句结合使用，使文章更加具有可读性。文章段落清晰，结构合理，展示了小作者的英语写作功底。