三、将可有可无的字句删去鲁迅说;“写完后至少看两遍,竭力将可有可无的字、句,段删去,毫不可惜。”古人也提倡惜墨如金,“增一字则繁,减一字则阙”,“篇无累句,句无累字”。用这些标准来要求,不难发现我们报上不少消息的文字远没有达到。例(1)“地处北京南郊,过去备受‘沙荒’之苦的大兴县如今开出了‘五朵金花’:大兴县鸡蛋、鲜奶、蔬菜、西瓜和成片的绿林,使首都人民 Third, the dispensable words deleted Lu Xun said; “After reading at least twice, trying to be dispensable words, sentences, paragraph deleted, no shame.” The ancients also promote ink such as gold, “by A word is complicated, minus a word is Que, ”“ articles without accumulative sentences, sentence no words. ” With these standards, it is not hard to find that many of the messages in our newspapers are far from complete. Example (1) "Daxing County, located in the southern suburbs of Beijing and suffering much from desertification, has now opened five golden flowers: eggs, milk, vegetables, watermelons and green forest in Daxing County, bringing the capital people