小学生写记叙文,一般都写成流水账,时间地点人物事件都有,但读起来就是干巴巴的没有味道,问题出在哪里呢?究其根源,其实是因为学生在叙事的时候,没有关注细节,而让每个故事都粗枝大叶,平平淡淡,因此,要想让小学生的写作水平有所提高,就必须帮助小学生关注细节,抓住细节,写好细节。 Students write narratives, are generally written into running account, the time and place of personal events have, but it does not taste dry reading, where is the problem? The root cause, in fact, because students in the narrative time, did not pay attention to the details, and So that each story is cumbersome, plain, so in order to improve the writing skills of pupils, we must help pupils concerned about the details, grasp the details, write the details.