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有道命题作文,题目是《我心中的偶像》,某同学的作文写得妙笔生花,构思精巧,人物也栩栩如生。可奇怪的是老师并没有给该同学满分,而全班同学一致认为该作文能拿满分,于是该同学“理直气壮”跟老师理论,老师的评点是文章中时尚语言(口头语)如“粉丝”“弱弱地问”“偶们”过多。双方各执一端,仁智互见。追求时尚、创新,本不是件坏事,然而语言上的过于时尚,过于标新立异,也有待商榷。
There is a proposition composition, the title is “Idol in my heart”, a student’s essay written wonderful flowers, delicate ideas, characters are also alive. Strangely enough, the teacher did not give this classmate a perfect score. The classmates all agreed that the composition was able to get full marks, so the classmate was “righteous” and talked with the teacher. The teacher’s commentary was the fashion language (verbal word) in the article such as “fans”. Weakly asked, “We have too many”. Both parties perform one end and meet each other. The pursuit of fashion and innovation is not a bad thing. However, language is too fashionable and too innovative. It is also open to question.