说到作文讲评课,一般是念几篇范文,概括说说优缺点,然后把作文发下去。而发下去的那篇作文往往最后不知所踪,多么可惜!于是我想,不如每一篇都指导学生修改到位,然后结集,作为指导学生读写实践的一个个性化平台。北京五中的庭院中,有几棵老槐树,每逢五月就氤氲飘香。这些集子,就得名《槐苑文存》。从2008年12月到今天,我们已经为学 Speaking of essay comment class, generally read a few Pham Van, summarize the advantages and disadvantages, and then send down the composition. However, the essay sent down the last often missing, so what a pity! So I think, as each guide students to modify the place, and then collected, as a guide to guide the practice of reading and writing a personalized platform. Beijing five in the courtyard, there are a few old locust trees, every May fragrance. These sets, you get the name “Huai Yuan Wen deposit.” From December 2008 to today, we have learned