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假定英語课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（一）
Life can be tough sometimes because there is always something unexpected happened， which may tire or even stop us. However， we can’t choose to escape. We are supposed take responsibility for us and our families. Several year ago， my father lost his job and was unemployed for a long time. So he didn’t take it seriously. Instead， he believed he had an enough time to rest and think about how to make a newly living. Now he had received a well-paid job offer. So， when you are faced with challenges， choosing to believe good things are in the way.
（二）
Dear Lucy，
I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend， Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come， you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street which are full of local foods.
Best regards，
Janet
（三）
One evening I went out with my friends Wang Yi for a meal in a country pub. We left at 9：30 and I was offered to take Wang Yi home. We were driving along while， suddenly， a car drove past us out of control. The car crashed and before that it burst into flames. We ran to the burning car quickly. When we get there， we saw three people trapping inside. They were screaming and we knew we had to get them in. It was extreme hot as we opened the doors， but we saved them successfully. It’s nice feeling to know they have helped to save those people.
（四）
Writing was my favorite class at school. My teacher， Bebe Usi， was devoting and encouraging. We each spent several classes make a paper mask and wore it when reading our own work before the class. I have forgotten that composition now， I remember the feeling of the mask on my face and my heart was beating wild as I shared my composition. I was afraid of but proud. I have written many compositions before that but none of which had been chosen to be read before the class. They perhaps weren’t the best composition and the most beauty mask in my class. But they both were mine. （五）
I still remember that thing a few years ago and feel afraid. It happens on my way to Mark’s home. It was Sunday. I would like to go to visit Mark. However， when I passed a river， I saw several children at my age play in the river. How happily they were！ At that time， I had idea that I would like to ask Mark to go our swimming with me in the river. Suddenly， something scary happened. One of the children slipped and the other wanted to help him. Unfortunately， all of them were struggling. I was shocking. And then I rushed to the river bank at once. I knew that happened. A few hours later I heard the death of them. I was such frightened and sad that I have ever gone to any river since then.
（六）
In the past few month， many people gathered to dance in our community square， which is designed to improve living quality. Although dancing helps to keep healthy， but the long-?time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought inconvenience. I couldn’t rest or sleep well， which made me terrible upset. I felt so sleep in class that I performed badly in study. To solve a problem， I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they shortening the dance time and reduce the music noise. Only by this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their delight， they adopted my suggestion.
（七）
After school， as usual， I went back home. On the bus， I find a woman with a cute baby standing besides me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. Though I was very tiring then， I rose from my seat and gave my seat up her and the baby without hesitation. She thanked me several times sincerely， that made me feel extremely proud. Just then I have realized my little favor could real make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. Arrived home， I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesses because I did a little for a stranger and I gained a lot.
（八）
（2020全國新课标卷Ⅰ）
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs， and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way，” my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（一）
Life can be tough sometimes because there is always something unexpected happened， which may tire or even stop us. However， we can’t choose to escape. We are supposed take responsibility for us and our families. Several year ago， my father lost his job and was unemployed for a long time. So he didn’t take it seriously. Instead， he believed he had an enough time to rest and think about how to make a newly living. Now he had received a well-paid job offer. So， when you are faced with challenges， choosing to believe good things are in the way.
（二）
Dear Lucy，
I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend， Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come， you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street which are full of local foods.
Best regards，
Janet
（三）
One evening I went out with my friends Wang Yi for a meal in a country pub. We left at 9：30 and I was offered to take Wang Yi home. We were driving along while， suddenly， a car drove past us out of control. The car crashed and before that it burst into flames. We ran to the burning car quickly. When we get there， we saw three people trapping inside. They were screaming and we knew we had to get them in. It was extreme hot as we opened the doors， but we saved them successfully. It’s nice feeling to know they have helped to save those people.
（四）
Writing was my favorite class at school. My teacher， Bebe Usi， was devoting and encouraging. We each spent several classes make a paper mask and wore it when reading our own work before the class. I have forgotten that composition now， I remember the feeling of the mask on my face and my heart was beating wild as I shared my composition. I was afraid of but proud. I have written many compositions before that but none of which had been chosen to be read before the class. They perhaps weren’t the best composition and the most beauty mask in my class. But they both were mine. （五）
I still remember that thing a few years ago and feel afraid. It happens on my way to Mark’s home. It was Sunday. I would like to go to visit Mark. However， when I passed a river， I saw several children at my age play in the river. How happily they were！ At that time， I had idea that I would like to ask Mark to go our swimming with me in the river. Suddenly， something scary happened. One of the children slipped and the other wanted to help him. Unfortunately， all of them were struggling. I was shocking. And then I rushed to the river bank at once. I knew that happened. A few hours later I heard the death of them. I was such frightened and sad that I have ever gone to any river since then.
（六）
In the past few month， many people gathered to dance in our community square， which is designed to improve living quality. Although dancing helps to keep healthy， but the long-?time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought inconvenience. I couldn’t rest or sleep well， which made me terrible upset. I felt so sleep in class that I performed badly in study. To solve a problem， I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they shortening the dance time and reduce the music noise. Only by this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their delight， they adopted my suggestion.
（七）
After school， as usual， I went back home. On the bus， I find a woman with a cute baby standing besides me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. Though I was very tiring then， I rose from my seat and gave my seat up her and the baby without hesitation. She thanked me several times sincerely， that made me feel extremely proud. Just then I have realized my little favor could real make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. Arrived home， I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesses because I did a little for a stranger and I gained a lot.
（八）
（2020全國新课标卷Ⅰ）
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs， and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way，” my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.