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国内某英文报纸设有一个求助信箱(Letter to Dr. Helper),请根据下列学生现状调查分析表中列出的信息,以高三学生王勇的名义用英语给Dr. Helper 写一封信。
注 意
1. 词数:100左右;
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入要求的字数。
Dear Dr. Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure...
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong
写作改析
Dear Dr. Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours to do{1} my homework at home.
Our{2} teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have no{3} time to do we want{4}. Besides, we even don’t have enough sleep. There seems to have{5} three causes about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many{6}homework and the high expectations from the parents and teachers. We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we don’t{7} have the chance to go to the{8} university. I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk{9}. I am looking forward to get{10} your advice.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong
评 语
此篇习作是篇中档作文。基本完成了此作文题要求表达的要点。语言衔接比较自然,部分错误不会太影响读者的理解。从所出现的错误来看,建议加强介词、非谓语动词以及固定搭配的学习。
{1}doing {2}We {3}any {4}what we want {5}be
{6}much {7}won’t {8}去掉the {9}talk to {10}getting
编辑/孙栎栎
注:本文中所涉及到的图表、注解、公式等内容请以PDF格式阅读原文。
国内某英文报纸设有一个求助信箱(Letter to Dr. Helper),请根据下列学生现状调查分析表中列出的信息,以高三学生王勇的名义用英语给Dr. Helper 写一封信。
注 意
1. 词数:100左右;
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入要求的字数。
Dear Dr. Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure...
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong
写作改析
Dear Dr. Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours to do{1} my homework at home.
Our{2} teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have no{3} time to do we want{4}. Besides, we even don’t have enough sleep. There seems to have{5} three causes about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many{6}homework and the high expectations from the parents and teachers. We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we don’t{7} have the chance to go to the{8} university. I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk{9}. I am looking forward to get{10} your advice.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong
评 语
此篇习作是篇中档作文。基本完成了此作文题要求表达的要点。语言衔接比较自然,部分错误不会太影响读者的理解。从所出现的错误来看,建议加强介词、非谓语动词以及固定搭配的学习。
{1}doing {2}We {3}any {4}what we want {5}be
{6}much {7}won’t {8}去掉the {9}talk to {10}getting
编辑/孙栎栎
注:本文中所涉及到的图表、注解、公式等内容请以PDF格式阅读原文。