某学校新近出了一期校刊,一个从没教过语文的体育老师看完后发表感慨:这些作文写得文通字顺,却不能给人一点点惊喜。体育老师所说的惊喜,就是通常我们在读到一篇好文章时那种眼前一亮或者心头一颤的感觉。体育老师还说:这些作文大多一看开头就知道中间,知道结尾。也就是说,在体育老师这个普通读者——或者说是作文教学的旁观者——看来,这些文章全都进入了一个模式。 A school recently out of a periodical, a teacher never read Chinese sports teacher read after feeling: these essays written in the text, but can not give people a little bit of surprise. What a sports teacher says about surprises is the kind of glitz or heartbeat that we usually read when we read a good article. Physical education teacher also said: most of these compositions first look at the beginning to know the middle, know the end. That said, in the eyes of the average physical education teacher - or bystander writing teaching - all of these articles entered a pattern.