一、不按要求,随意行文。写作(一)规定:“不少于5个字,不超过15个字。”少数考生无视这一要求,以至得0分。写作(二)是肖像描写,应着力描写两个小姑娘的外貌、表情和服饰,而有些考生却大力描述玫瑰园景色,详细叙写母女的对话,这就离题了二、观点错误,说法片面。考生中有的以鲜花喻姑娘,说什么“家花没有野花香”;有的说人像玫瑰花一样容易凋谢,宣扬及时享受,及时行乐等,这类例子虽少,但应引起重视。三、联系牵强,生拉硬扯。一是违背情理。玫瑰有刺,是其特性,而有些考生却在刺有毒(?)上大做文章,有的以刺毒喻“六害”,有的以刺毒 First, do not follow the requirements, free to write. Writing (1) stipulates: “No less than 5 words, no more than 15 words.” A minority of candidates ignore this requirement, and they receive 0 points. Writing (2) is a portrait depiction. It should focus on describing the appearance, expression and costumes of the two young girls. Some candidates strongly describe the scenery of the rose garden and describe the dialogue between the mother and daughter in detail. This is a digression. One-sided. Some of the candidates use flowers to describe the girl, saying that “home flowers do not have wild flowers”; some people say that people are as easy to wither as roses, promote timely enjoyment, enjoy music, and so on. Although there are few such examples, they should be taken seriously. Third, the connection is far-fetched. The first is contrary to reason. The roses are thorny and their characteristics. Some candidates take a large dose of thorns and poisons. Some use thorn poisons to describe the “six harms” and others use thorn poisons.