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原稿: [1]Last April my good friend Jessie andI enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nanjing. It wasan experience because of the wonderfulweather, the lovely partner and the beautifulplaces of interest we visited. [2]Good weather is rather essential fora exiting trip. Fortunately, we had wonderfulone that day. The trip to Nanjing was inApril so it was neither too hot nor too cold.The sky was clear blue and the sunshine wasso bright that we took many beautiful photos.In addition, a gentle breeze kept the air fromgetting muggy and made us feel cool afterthe long walking.
The manuscript: [1]Last April my good friend Jessie andI enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nanjing. It wasan experience because of the wonderfulweather, the lovely partner and the beautifulplaces of interest we visited. [2]Good weather is rather essential fora exiting trip. Fortunately, we had wonderfulone that day. The trip to Nanjing was in April so it was neither too hot nor too cold. The sky was clear blue and the sunshine wasso bright that we took many beautiful photos.In addition, a gentle breeze kept the air Fromgetting muggy and made us feel cool after the long walking.