读了田海燕同志的“屏簫玉笛谱新声”,总有这样一个感觉:文章的語言很別扭,語法和修辞的毛病层出不穷。文章写成了,而且拿来发表,目的就很清楚:把自己的思想認識传达給讀者,使讀者理解它、接受它。就文艺作品来講,那就得更多地从情感方面去影响讀者。中国有句老话:“辞达而已矣。” After reading Comrade Tian Haiyan’s “New sound of screen flute and jade flute”, there is always a feeling that the language of the article is very awkward, and the problems of grammar and rhetoric are endless. The article is written, and it is published. The purpose is very clear: to convey our thoughts and understanding to readers, so that the reader understands it and accepts it. In terms of literary and artistic works, it is necessary to influence readers more emotionally. There is an old saying in China: “It’s just a resignation.”