《语文知识》1996年第2期《一例值得推敲的比喻》一文,对高中语文第一册台湾作家李乐薇《我的空中楼阁》中的词语使用提出了批评。批评者认为:“小屋在山的怀抱中,犹如在花蕊(A)中一般,慢慢地花蕊(B)绽开了一些,好像层山后退了一些”一句中,连用两个比喻,(A) “Language Knowledge”, No. 2, 1996, “An example worthy of a metaphor”, criticized the use of words in the “My Castle” by the Taiwan writer Li Lewei in the first volume of High School Chinese. The critics think: “The hut is in the embrace of the mountain, as if it were in the stamen (A), and slowly the stamen (B) has opened some, as if the mountains had receded from it.” In the sentence, two metaphors are used. (A)