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我有一个上小学四年级的外孙女,只要是课本里规定的作文,每次她都先写给我看。我提出意见,她再作修改。目的是为了到老师那得个“高分”。有一天,我对她说:“以后你不要再让我看作文了。作文由老师来看就够了。还是经常写日记练笔好。你先每周交给我两篇日记,以后逐渐做到一天写一篇。”(这里指练笔的写作,不包括个人的隐私)她立刻噘起小嘴,喃喃地
I have a granddaughter who is in the fourth grade of elementary school. As long as the essay is specified in the textbooks, she writes to me first. I give my opinion and she will make further changes. The purpose is to get the teacher a “high score.” One day, I said to her: “In the future, you should not let me treat you as an essay. It is enough for the teacher to read the essay or to write diary and pen frequently. You should give me two diaries a week, Write an article a day. ”(Here refers to practice pen writing, does not include personal privacy) She immediately pouted a small mouth, whispered