近年来,高考优秀作文中常见一些用叙述、抒情、议论相结合的方式写成的人物再现式的散文,比如《李白的泪水》《昭君出塞》《碧海青天夜夜心》等。有些学生也模仿着写这类文章,却往往只能得到较低的评价,个中原因主要就是他们只注意到了其外在的“形”,却忽略了其内在的“神”。 In recent years, in the excellent composition of college entrance examinations, some of the characters’ reproducible essays have been written in a combination of narrative, lyrical, and argumentative methods, such as “Li Bai’s Tears,” “Zhao Jun’s Outlets,” and “Baihai Qingtian Night and Night Hearts.” Some students also imitate the writing of such articles, but often only get a lower rating. The main reason is that they only noticed their external “form”, but they ignored its inherent “god.”