作文讲评课上,我请刘顺顺同学读她写的《等待春游》这篇习作:等待春游这是个平平常常的下午,一位同学悄悄地对我说:“我听老师说,明天去栖霞山春游。”我听了,立刻一蹦三尺高,大声叫道:“真的?太棒了!”我简直不敢相信这是真的,像是在做梦一般……这个消息一时间传遍全班,所有的人都兴奋不已。平日里,我们在教室里待够了,真想到外面去放松放松。“去栖霞山,确定吗?”“是步行还是乘车?”“春游需要穿校服 Writing commentary class, I asked Liu Shunshun students to read her ”waiting for spring travel“ this exercise: waiting for spring travel This is a mediocre afternoon, a classmate quietly said to me: ”I heard the teacher said tomorrow to Qixiashan Spring break. “I listened, and immediately jumped three feet high and shouted:” Really? Great! “I could not believe it was real, as if I was dreaming ... Time spread throughout the class, all of them are excited. On weekdays, we had enough in the classroom and really wanted to relax outside. ”To Qixiashan, OK? “ ”Is walking or riding? “ ”Spring travel need to wear school uniforms