一、“爆炸的威力有的相当于一百万吨,有的相当于几十万吨梯恩梯炸药”一句有缺少宾语的语病。1989年再版的课本将它改成“爆炸的威力有的相当几百万吨的梯恩梯炸药,有的相当于几十万吨的梯恩梯炸药。”我以为,改了以后的句子,仍然有动宾搭配不当、语气不协调、表达不精炼的弊病。将这个句子的主干浓缩出来,便是“威 First, “the power of an explosion is equivalent to one million tons, and some are equivalent to hundreds of thousands of tons of TNT explosives.” One sentence has missing language. The textbook reprinted in 1989 changed it to “The explosives have quite a few million tons of TNT explosives. Some of them are equivalent to hundreds of thousands of tons of TNT explosives.” I thought that after the sentence was changed, there was still a movement. Improper collocation, uncoordinated tone, and unrefined malpractice. Condensing the main body of this sentence is