我是甘蔗,是水果里的高个,身上有像竹子一样的条纹。我身穿一件深紫色的大衣,用刀把我的皮削掉,里面是洁白的果肉。一口咬下去,甘甜的汁水在嘴里流淌,而且还能止渴。我还能制成甘蔗汁和甘蔗面包。你们喜欢我吗?简评:“喜欢!”听到小作者运用拟人化、幽默的语言介绍甘蔗的形态、果肉、作用,怎能不爱上甘蔗呢?语言流畅、生动、有趣。 I am a sugar cane, a tall fruit, with bamboo-like stripes. I wore a dark purple coat, cut my skin with a knife, which is a white pulp. A bite, sweet juice flowing in his mouth, but also to quench their thirst. I can also make cane juice and sugar cane bread. Comments: “like! ” I heard small writers use anthropomorphic, humorous language to introduce sugar cane morphology, flesh, function, how can I not love sugar cane? Language smooth, vivid and interesting.