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自本刊第4期刊出“评论无奖征文”启事以来,受到读者的欢迎和积极支持。现选登三篇读者来稿如下。这三篇稿件除都具有导向正确、逻辑严密、论据充分、文笔流畅等这样一些评论所要求的基本要素外,还有着两个鲜明的特点。一是论述的题材和所要褒贬的问题,都是从现实生活中拾取的,是有感而发,有很强的针对性,说明作者眼睛盯着现实,关注现实生活,而不是无的放矢,无病呻吟。二是文笔精炼而略有风趣,引文和引语恰到好处而不显罗嗦冗长。像《有感于“吹牛纳锐”》一文只有320个字。《怎样热爱自己这张脸》一文,引用了古语和黑格尔的名言,《三国演义》中夏侯惇以及令人葛优、凌峰的故事、言论,可谓“旁征博引”,但都是点到为止,为主题服务。《能使企业增色,身居陋室何妨》一文中引用后人纪念诸葛亮的一副对联:“自古宇宙垂名,布衣有几;能使山川生色,陋室何妨。”不但紧贴主题,深化主题,而且使文笔增色而略显文采。三文均有不足之处。《有感于“吹牛纳税”》一文,依据的事实是1986年—1991年的,显得过于陈旧。《怎样热爱自己这张脸》,如果联系到心灵美、讲文明比脸孔美更重要,则更深化一步。《能使企业增色,身居陋室何妨》,原文1200字,显得冗长罗嗦,现为520字,是编者删改的结果。读者对这三篇文章及上述评点,有何意见,欢迎来信提出,共同探讨提高。
Since the publication of the fourth issue of this issue “comments no prize essay” since the opening, by the reader’s welcome and active support. The following are the three articles selected by readers. Apart from the basic elements required by some of the commentary such as correct orientation, strict logic, sufficient arguments and fluent writing, these three articles have two distinctive features. First, the subject of discussion and the issues to be criticized and rejected are all picked up from real life. They are sensations and are highly targeted. This shows that the author is keeping an eye on the reality and focusing on the real life rather than looking at him and groaning without illness. Second, the writing is refined and slightly funny, quotations and quotations just right without obvious wordy lengthy. Like “feeling” bragging satisfied “” a text is only 320 words. The article “How to Love Your Face” quotes the old saying and Hegel’s famous saying, “The Romance of the Three Kingdoms” in Xiahou Dan and Ge Youyou, Ling Feng’s stories and remarks can be described as “ Serve the theme. ”Can make the company to enhance the color, standing in the bathroom Why?“ The article quoted later generations commemorating Zhuge Liang as a couplet: ”ancient universe name, commoner; can make mountains color, shabby room why not.“ Not only close to the theme, deepen the theme , But also make writing a little bit more color and graceful. Trials have deficiencies. ”Feeling“ taxpayers ”“ article, based on the fact that from 1986 to 1991, it is too old. ”How to love yourself this face“, if the contact is soul beauty, civilization is more important than the face of the United States, then a deeper step. ”To enable companies to enhance the color, standing in the bathroom Why not," the original 1200 words, seem lengthy wordy, now 520 words, is the result of editorial changes. Readers of these three articles and the above comments, any comments, welcome letter proposed to jointly explore and improve.