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这是一篇立意新巧的记叙文。随着人民生活水平的提高,孩子们的手上普遍都有一些等待开销的零花钱。如何使用这笔小小的财产?顺着这样的思路去搜集材料、提炼主题,可以写出一篇立意高而且容易见出思想性的文章,但是写多了,也就不容易出新。这篇文章的作者跳出了这种习见的老套,别开生面,不着力于“怎样使用”的铺展与描述,而且通过零用钱积攒过程的不易与消费品使用价值的对比,接触到了全社会普遍关心的
This is a novel narrative. With the improvement of people’s living standards, children’s hands generally have some pocket money waiting for expenses. How to use this little property? Following the idea of collecting materials and refining themes, you can write a highly thought-provoking article that is easy to see. However, when you write more, it is not easy to create new ones. The author of this article jumped out of the stereotypes of this kind of practice and looked beyond the details of “how to use” the exhibition and description. Through the comparison of the value of the pocket money accumulation process and the value of consumer goods, the general social concern