当前,很多中学生尤其是初中生写作文时常常空洞无物,不够生动。经历几年的作文教学实践,我发现只要让学生在写作的过程中抓住“学会观察、关注细节、善用修辞”这三把钥匙,就一定能让学生在不断的训练过程中写出“生动”的作文。1、第一把钥匙:学会观察现在的中学生,由于生活面较窄,再加上平时学习压力大,对生活中的观察和感受往往不够细致和深刻,这点反应在作文之中就是:文字苍白无力;无病呻吟或者大 At present, many middle school students, especially junior high school students, are often empty and not vivid in writing essays. After several years of writing teaching practice, I found that as long as we allow students to grasp in the process of writing “learn to observe, pay attention to details, make good use of rhetoric” these three keys, we will certainly be able to let students write in the continuous training process Out of “vivid” composition. 1, the first key: learn to observe the current high school students, because of the narrow life, coupled with the usual pressure of learning, observation and feeling of life are often not meticulous and profound enough, this reaction is in the composition is: text Pale and weak; groan or no disease