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语言是表达思想感情的工具,但是,要把自己的观点或者感情通过语言传达给别人,并不是一件很容易的事,几千年以前的古人在《文心雕龙》中就已经感慨,动笔之前,好像有满肚子的话要说,可是真的落在纸上,发现连自己想要表达的一半都不到。语言学家王力先生有过一个形象的比喻,要写好文章,就要“像木匠爱斧锯、画家爱颜料、战士爱武器”那样爱语言这个工具。可见,语言对于我们写好文章有多重要。语言能力的提高不是一朝一夕的事,这里,我们选择一些学生例文(有优秀的,也有存在问题的),结合写作的某些方面进行点评,希望能对同学们语言能力的提高有所帮助。
Language is a tool for expressing thoughts and feelings. However, it is not an easy task to convey one's own opinions or feelings to others through language. The ancients a few thousand years ago expressed their feelings in the “Literary Heart Carving Dragons” Before writing, it seems to be full of words to say, but really fell on the paper and found that even the half you want to express are not. Linguist Mr. Wang Li has an image analogy, to write the article, it is necessary to “like a carpenter ax ax painter love paints, soldiers love weapons,” that language like this tool. Visible, language how important we write the article. The improvement of language ability is not an overnight success. Here we select some examples of students (excellent and problematic) and make comments on some aspects of writing, hoping to help improve their language ability.