一篇写人的作文生动不生动,感人不感人,关键是“这个人物”写没写活。也就是说有没有捕捉到“这个人物”的“一刹那”,并在这“一刹那”中给人物“拍摄”几个“特写镜头”,让读者的心受到震动。因此,我们作文时,一定要捕捉住人物的“一刹那”,写得生动具体,写得活灵活现,打动人心。在这方面,很多课文为我们提供了范例。 A person writing a vivid composition is not vivid, moving touching, the key is “this character” did not write live. That is to say, have you captured the “moment” of “this person” and “shot” a few “close-ups” of people during this “moment” so that the heart of the reader will be shaken. Therefore, when we write a composition, we must capture the “moment” of the character and write it vividly and vividly and emotionally. In this regard, many texts provide us with examples.