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点评今年的高考作文以“竞争对手合作共渡独木桥”的故事为题材,考查学生对于“竞争”、“规则”、“合作”、“双赢”等的理解。本文作者能把握命题意图,立意准确。以“人间有味是共赢”为题,既能彰显题旨,又新颖别致,可谓诗意扑面,触目生情。文章整体结构采用的是常见的并列式结构,起手便是一幅素雅的对弈图,用笔虽简,画面却清晰饱满,令人耳目一新,弈者的共赢也为下文的议论做好铺垫。接下来,作者顺势结合现实点题,说明“共赢”的可贵,最后一句与对弈图相照应,以形象说理,含蓄有味。接下来是文章的主体部分,分别从“淡然”、“合作”、“发扬”三个角度,说明实现共赢所需的条件,结构虽无新意,但语言却特
Comments on this year’s college entrance essay to “competition partners to spend alone bridge ” story as the subject, examine the students for “competition ”, “rules ”, “cooperation ”, “win ” understanding. The author of this article can grasp the intention of proposition, conception and accuracy. To “human taste is a win-win situation,” as the title, both to highlight the theme, but also novel and unique, can be described as poetic riches, touching the passions. The overall structure of the article is a common parallel structure, starting hands is an elegant game diagram, with a pen is simple, the picture is clear and full, refreshing, win-win situation for the following pave the way for discussion . Next, the author combines the reality with the topic, indicating “win-win ” valuable, the last sentence and the chess figure phase response, image management, implicit flavor. The next part is the main part of the essay, which shows the necessary conditions for the realization of a win-win situation from three perspectives of “indifferently”, “cooperation” and “development” respectively. Although the structure is new but the language is special