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随着时间的推移,女儿的写作水平大有长进,偶尔也能在当地晚报“小记者”栏目上发表一些新闻、游记等文章。也就是随着她的习作不断见诸报端,对我这位她的“作文辅导员”不再“盲目崇拜”。有一次,她作为我的第一读者,竟然对我的文章进行了认真地点评:“爸爸,我每次看你写的文章,都觉得你写得还不错,但有一个老毛病总没改过来。”没等她说完,我就急切地问:“哪一个老毛病?”“就是我上次跟你讲的那个‘的地得’的用法。”她
As time goes by, my daughter’s writing skills have greatly improved, and I can occasionally post some news and travel notes on the local Evening Newsletters. That is, as her practices continue to see the newspapers, to me this her “composition counselors ” no longer “blind worship ”. Once, as my first reader, she made a serious comment on my essay: “Dad, every time I read your essay, I think you wrote well, but there is always an old problem Changed over. ”“ Without waiting for her to finish, I eagerly asked: ”Which one is wrong? “ ”It’s the way I used to tell you about it.“ ”