第三部分几种典型的病句一、用词不当(词性误用,不及物动词带了宾语,简称失当,滥用、误用、乱改文言词语和成语,生造词语)*在县长的一再压力下,银行无奈,最后只得给他们贷款30万元。(词性误用)*如今,裕安大厦已成为安徽省和各地市接轨浦东的重要载体。(不及物动词带了宾语)*华东人说,这主要是公司大力发展规模经营、多种经营,加强集中订货和成套配送的结果。(文章中“华东”指中国船舶工业物资华东公司)(简称失当)*重庆市将集中力量发展民用气,逐年降低民用、商用煤用量,争取在2010年以前气化所有县城以上的城市。(简称失当)*[新闻标题]市卫协向灾区捐款献爱心,市红会开展募捐救灾工作。(简称失当) The third part of several typical illnesses First, improper use of words (part of speech misuse, intransitive verbs with objects, referred to as misconduct, abuse, misuse, chaos change words and idioms, to create words) * In the mayor’s Repeated pressure, the banks helpless, and finally had to give them loans 30 million. (Part of Speech Misuse) * Today, Yu An Building has become an important carrier of Pudong in Anhui Province and all parts of the country. (Intransitive with the object) * East China said that this is mainly the company vigorously develop large-scale management, diversified operations, and strengthen the centralized ordering and delivery results. (Article “East China” refers to China Shipbuilding Industry East China Company) (abbreviated as improper) * Chongqing will focus its efforts on developing civilian gas and reducing the amount of commercial and commercial coal consumption year by year, and strive to vaporize cities above the county level by 2010 . (Abbreviated as improper) * [News Title] City Association to donate money to the disaster area love, City Red will conduct fundraising relief work. (Referred to as misconduct)