Last Saturday， I had a school trip with my classmates. We went to a farm in the countryside. We fed sheep and chickens there. And we helped the farmers pick some apples and other fruits. After lunch， we climbed the hill near the farm. There are some beautiful flowers on the hill. we took a lot of photos. We talked with the farmers and learned a lot about farming. We felt happy but tired. It was a great day！
　　【简评】这篇学生习作是学习完一般过去时态后，学生记叙了一次学校郊游的过程，其中运用了课本中出现的多个重点短语，达到了活学活用，学以致用的学习效果！
　　指导教师：那莎