皮皮,“我们学校约有2000~3000名学生”这句话……高老师,这不是我的作文《我可爱的学校》中的一句话嘛!这句话怎么了?看来你真是不知道自己错在哪儿了。口语和书面语里经常会出现表意重复的冗余成分。有冗余成分的句子是病句。哦?这句话有冗余成分?“约”与“2000~3000”表意重复,删去“约”这句话就不是病句了。 Phi Phi, “Our school is about 2000 ~ 3000 students ” This sentence ... High teacher, this is not my writing “my cute school” in a word Well! This sentence what happened? It seems you Really do not know where they are wrong. Duplicate and redundant elements often appear in spoken and written language. Sentences with redundant ingredients are sentences. Oh? This sentence has redundant components? “About ” and “2000 ~ 3000 ” ideographic repeat, delete “about ” this sentence is not ill.