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许多同学写完作文之后,往往就不再仔细阅读,而是直接上交了事。这样写出的作文常错别字连篇,病句频频,层次混乱,有的甚至偏离了主题。其实,文章写完还只能算是半成品,只有经过反复雕琢才能成为精品。古今中外的所有佳作,无不是作者用心修改的结果:《红楼梦》经过“披阅十载,增删五次”;托尔斯泰的长篇巨著《战争与和平》改过七遍;鲁迅先生的散文《藤野先生》,全文不足4000字,改动的地方却多达160余处。何其芳说:“古往今来,凡是文章写得好的人,大概都在修改上用过功夫。”
Many students finish writing, they often no longer read carefully, but directly handed down. The compositions written in this way are often mispronounced with frequent sick sentences, chaotic levels, and some even deviating from the theme. In fact, the finished article can only be regarded as semi-finished products, only after repeated carving to become a boutique. All the masterpieces at all times and at home and abroad are all the results of the author’s intentions: “Dream of Red Mansions” has been changed over seven times since the publication of “A Dream of Red Mansions” after “ten readings containing ten additions and deletions”; Tolstoy’s masterpiece “War and Peace” “Mr. Fujino”, the full text of less than 4000 words, changes in place but as many as 160 place. He Qifang said: “Throughout the ages, those who write good articles, probably have spent time on the changes.”