习作教学中,教师一直在不厌其烦地要求学生把文章写具体、写生动,因为具体生动的表达能使读者如见其人、如闻其声、如临其境。然而,尽管一次次地传授方法,一次次地强调,许多学生的表达依然不尽如人意。依笔者教学实践,让“具体生动”不再那么神秘 In the teaching of practice, the teacher has been taking the trouble to ask the students to write the article in a concrete and vivid way, because the concrete and vivid expression can make the reader see his or her person as if he or she is heard. However, despite the methods being taught over and over again, it was stressed time and time again that many students are still not quite satisfied with their expressions. According to the author’s teaching practice, let “vivid ” is no longer so mysterious