“片断修改，二次练笔”是指教师要求学生在教师的作文批改与讲评后，针对作文批改后的不足之处与修改建议，结合教师讲评中获得的新感悟，以片断修改的形式进行二次练笔；以期达到一次作文，两次收获，切实提高学生的作文素质。当然，对于小学生的作文的修改，并非要求其... “Piece modification, secondary practice pen” refers to the teacher asking students to modify and comment on the composition of the teacher after the essay for the deficiencies and suggestions for revisions, combined with the teacher's comments obtained in the new insights, to modify the form of two Time practice pen; in order to achieve a composition, twice harvested, and effectively improve the quality of the composition of students. Of course, the composition of the pupils to amend, not asking them ...