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在广东高考的任务型写作中，写作要求的第一条要求：在作文中可使用实例或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。这条要求就是在提示我们要给出范例，要让你作为亲身经历者、目击者或其他第三者来简要讲述过去、反思自己或他人的行为或心态。使你的文章结构更清晰，内容更充实。然而大部分考生却忽略列举实例这一要求，在文章里夸夸其谈，一味的讲道理，没有真凭实据，整篇作文论据不足，文笔浮夸，这就大大减少了得分率。
在列举实例时可以以自身为例，也可以他人为例，那么我们耳熟能详的名人更是我们举例的好对象。那么如何列举实例，下面我们一起探讨一下如何以名人为例，升华文章。
一、常用句式
1. 承上启下
举例时可以用如下的句式来开头：
（1）It suddenly occurs to me a famous person， sb， who....
（2）Having reading the passage， I can’t help recalling sb. who...
（3）A similar example jumps into my mind.
（4）It reminds me of a similar one that is ...
（5）A common example， which is often cited， is ...
2. 经历 结果
（1）There was a time when ...
（2）Due to/because of ... he/she ... As a result/consequence...
（3）As/ because ...， he... Consequently...
（4）In order to ...， he/she devoted himself/herself to ...
3. 转折 结果
（1）Having gone through those disasters， he/she...
（2）However，instead of giving up，he/she managed to ...
（3）Regardless of ...， he/she ...
（4）To change his/her fate， he/she ...
4. 经验教训/启示
（1）There is no doubt/denying that it was ... that...
（2）Only then did sb. realize that...
（3） ...， which illustrated that it was ...that...
（4）Therefore，it is not difficult for us to draw a conclusion that...
（5）Thus，we can know that…is of great significance.
二、几个实例
1. 举例说明毅力的重要性。
Having reading the passage， I can’t help recalling Helen Keller who is a great writer. As a child， she was deaf and blind due to a high fever. Instead of giving up， she overcame a great many difficulties to be able to read and write barely with her fingers. Finally， she managed to become one of the most successful writers in the world， which illustrated that it was her perseverance and insistence that enabled her to become one of the greatest women in the world.
2. 举例说明努力可以实现梦想。
A common example， which is often cited， is Edison. As we all know， Edison， a great inventor， made over 1300 inventions. When he was a child， he only received three years of education in primary school. However， instead of giving up， he achieved remarkable success in invention， which made great contribution to our human beings. It was his talent and endless effort that made him achieve his dream.
3. 举例说明参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的益处。
It suddenly occurs to me a famous person， Sa Beining， who is a talented host of CCTV.
Due to the influence of his family， he had a passion for singing. Because of his confidence and outgoing personality， he took part in plenty of student clubs and competitions during his school time to improve his ability and broaden his horizons. There was no doubt that it was those years of experience that made him to be admitted into Peking university and now become one of the most famous hosts in our country.
总之，若考生在写作中能够自如地运用名人的事迹来说明主题，阐明观点，可以让论据更有力，文章更充实。
（作者单位：珠海市斗门区和风中学）
责任编校 蒋小青
在列举实例时可以以自身为例，也可以他人为例，那么我们耳熟能详的名人更是我们举例的好对象。那么如何列举实例，下面我们一起探讨一下如何以名人为例，升华文章。
一、常用句式
1. 承上启下
举例时可以用如下的句式来开头：
（1）It suddenly occurs to me a famous person， sb， who....
（2）Having reading the passage， I can’t help recalling sb. who...
（3）A similar example jumps into my mind.
（4）It reminds me of a similar one that is ...
（5）A common example， which is often cited， is ...
2. 经历 结果
（1）There was a time when ...
（2）Due to/because of ... he/she ... As a result/consequence...
（3）As/ because ...， he... Consequently...
（4）In order to ...， he/she devoted himself/herself to ...
3. 转折 结果
（1）Having gone through those disasters， he/she...
（2）However，instead of giving up，he/she managed to ...
（3）Regardless of ...， he/she ...
（4）To change his/her fate， he/she ...
4. 经验教训/启示
（1）There is no doubt/denying that it was ... that...
（2）Only then did sb. realize that...
（3） ...， which illustrated that it was ...that...
（4）Therefore，it is not difficult for us to draw a conclusion that...
（5）Thus，we can know that…is of great significance.
二、几个实例
1. 举例说明毅力的重要性。
Having reading the passage， I can’t help recalling Helen Keller who is a great writer. As a child， she was deaf and blind due to a high fever. Instead of giving up， she overcame a great many difficulties to be able to read and write barely with her fingers. Finally， she managed to become one of the most successful writers in the world， which illustrated that it was her perseverance and insistence that enabled her to become one of the greatest women in the world.
2. 举例说明努力可以实现梦想。
A common example， which is often cited， is Edison. As we all know， Edison， a great inventor， made over 1300 inventions. When he was a child， he only received three years of education in primary school. However， instead of giving up， he achieved remarkable success in invention， which made great contribution to our human beings. It was his talent and endless effort that made him achieve his dream.
3. 举例说明参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的益处。
It suddenly occurs to me a famous person， Sa Beining， who is a talented host of CCTV.
Due to the influence of his family， he had a passion for singing. Because of his confidence and outgoing personality， he took part in plenty of student clubs and competitions during his school time to improve his ability and broaden his horizons. There was no doubt that it was those years of experience that made him to be admitted into Peking university and now become one of the most famous hosts in our country.
总之，若考生在写作中能够自如地运用名人的事迹来说明主题，阐明观点，可以让论据更有力，文章更充实。
（作者单位：珠海市斗门区和风中学）
责任编校 蒋小青