一堂命题作文讲评课。题目:生活一瞬间。面对50多双沉默的眼睛,我有些茫然,不知从何讲起。宣读“范文”,显然同学们并不十分认可。无奈,我开始尝试让大家评点自己的作文,我在一旁充当了纯粹的“辅导员”。A:看到这个题目,我首先想起了这样一句话:蝴蝶如果不经历出蛹的挣扎,就不 A proposition writing comment class. Topic: Live for a moment. In the face of more than 50 pairs of silent eyes, I am a little upset and I do not know where to start. When reading “Pan Wen,” it is obvious that the students are not very much convinced. In desperation, I began to try to make people comment on my composition. I was acting as a pure “counselor”. A: When I saw this topic, I first thought of the phrase: If the butterfly does not experience a struggle, it will not