一篇好的作品总是存在一个美妙的召唤结构,不断激起读者想象的涟漪,勾连读者曾经的情感体验。本文描述童年的一段徒手钓黄鳝经历,无论是情节叙述,还是人物形象、作品情感,其所产生的对读者的召唤力量,都令人难以拒绝。特别是情节的叙述方面,极富情趣。故事发生的环境,是有无尽诱惑的小堆河;原因是发现长鱼(黄鳝)不愿放弃,试捕不成反遭挑衅;于是作者顽性不改童心大发,忘掉妈妈的警告,也不在乎长鱼会咬人,用手指做道具与之玩起了游戏,玩得那么开心,那么自在,那么忘乎所以。与其说 A good work always exists a wonderful call structure, constantly arouse the ripples of readers imagination, hook readers once emotional experience. This article describes the childhood experience of a bare-hand fishing eel, whether narrative, or character images, works of emotion, the resulting call to the reader, are hard to refuse. In particular, narrative aspects, full of fun. The story of the environment, there is endless temptation of a small pile of river; because the discovery of the long-eared fish (eel) do not want to give up, try not to be provocatively provoked; so the author does not change their childish innocence, forget her mother’s warning, do not care Long fish will bite, do props with their fingers playing the game, so happy to play, so comfortable, so forget about it. Not so much