论文部分内容阅读
请指出下列病句的病因,并修改病句。(1)大型情景音舞诗画《天安门》,一开场就采用“幻影成像”与舞台真人的互动,营造出远古“北京人”穿越时空向人们跑来。(2)关于《品三国》,粗粗一看,似乎与其他同类的书没有多大区别,但反复品读,就会发现其意味深长。【参考答案】(1)病因:成分残缺。改为:大型情景音舞诗画《天安门》,一开场就采用“幻影成像”与舞台真人的互动,营造出远古“北京人”穿越时空向人们跑来的景象。
Please indicate the etiology of the following etiquette and amend the etiquette. (1) Tiananmen Square, a large-scale scene of sound and dance poetry, uses the interaction of “phantom imaging” and real people on stage to create an ancient “Peking Man ” running through time and space to people. (2) As for the “Three Kingdoms”, it does not seem to be much different from other books of the same kind, but repeated readings will find it meaningful. [Reference Answers] (1) cause: incomplete composition. It is replaced by the following: “Tiananmen Square” is a large-scale scene of sound and dance poetry and painting. The opening scene adopts the interaction between “phantom imaging” and real people on the stage to create an ancient “beijing man” running through time and space to people.