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高考英语作文是对学生综合能力的测试。在日常教学及各种应试中，要想提高学生的英语写作能力，除进行有效的训练外，还必须指导学生注意相应的写作方法和技巧。有感于平时教学工作中的问题，结合今年高考作文命题以及学生的应试情况，笔者认为应该从以下两方面来提高学生作文水平和写作技能。
一、培养学生掌握基本句型是夯实基础的前提
写好句子是我们永远的基本功。对高中学生来说，大纲要求会用五种基本句型来表达自己的思想。这种要求应该说不是很高，但真正做到却不易。写出准确流利的英语句子，可以说是我们英语教学的最低要求，也是我们的最高追求，我们每一个学英语的人都在为此努力，这就要求我们平时应加强对学生基本功的训练。
（一）培养学生运用基础语法知识构建正确的英语句子的能力
语法是构建句子的基本规则。语法教学可以分为两个层次：
1. 基本语法教学
这些语法高中阶段看起来似乎很简单，在写作中却往往容易丢分，学生也容易忽视。
以2007年高考作文为例。比如单、复数的一致问题，“20间单人间”正确的表达是20single rooms，但大部分学生都写成了20 single room。再如主谓一致的问题，“距白山入口处500米”正确表达应该是There stands out hotel 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.有的考生却写成：There stand out hotel 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.以上几例错误的出现固然有学生粗心的原因，但也从一个侧面反映出学生基础语法的掌握不牢固。
2. 培养学生运用复杂语法的能力
如强调句型it is/was…who/that…的应用，非谓语动词to do、doing等的互换使用，only引导的倒装句的应用，定语从句的使用等。有意识地使用这些复杂语法与句法能使句式更灵活，富有变化，在书面表达中也容易成为亮点，成为分数增长点。
（二）培养学生恰当使用过渡性词汇组合句子的能力
过渡性词语在英文写作中起重要作用，它可以使文章条理清楚、逻辑严密。我们在平时教学中要让学生分类积累过渡性词汇。根据文章的结构布局和它们在其中所起的作用，灵活掌握其用法。如表时间关系过渡的词汇firsr of all、at first、second、secondly、finally is；表达地点转变的in front of、on the right、at the top/bottom of is；表解释、列举的：that is，that is to say,such as，for example，for instance，mely,first(ly)，second(1y)，third(1y)等；表比较对照的：but，while，just like，on the other hand，on the contrary，however，in spite of等；表因果关系的：because(of)，for，as，since(that)，as a result，so，therefore等；表总结陈述的：in one word，in short，generally(speaking)，obviously,as above等。这些过渡性词语的恰当使用，可以增强语段的层次感和连贯性。
当然，掌握基本的语法后应该能写出不错的文章，但是还应该让文章增辉闪光。这就需要注意句式的使用和多变了。我们意识到句子表意功能具有多样性：意义不变，句式可以变化。因此，在意义(信息)一定的情况下，我们可以培养学生使用不同的句式表达。下面我们以2007年高考作文为例，给出三个不同样式，并且给每一个样式里句子编号，让读者在对比阅读中感受到不同句式的不同表达效果。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
A version:
①Baishan Mountain Hotel is open for business.②Out hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.③It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms,all with hot showers. ④A single room is 100 yuan and a double room is 150 yuan for one night.⑤You are advised to book in advance.⑥The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and Western rood for you to choose from.⑦You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. ⑧We also have a swimming pool,which is open all day and free of charge. ⑨All are welcome!
B version:
① There stands out hotel 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.②You will spend 100 yuan staying at one of the 20 single rooms for a night,or you will spend 150 yuan stayingat one of 15 double rooms for a night,③All single rooms and double rooms have their hot showers. ④You can choose from the Chinese food and Western food that we provide for you according to your taste.⑤And you can drink tea or coffee at the cafe.⑥Our hotel has a swimming pool,which is open all day and free of charge.⑦We are glad that you will come here.
C version:
①Out hotel is 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. ②20 single rooms and 15 double rooms wait for you.③Living in a single room for a night you should pay 100 yuan for it or living in a double room for a night you should pay 150 yuan for it. ④All rooms have their own hot showers.⑤The Chinese food and western food will give you a big surprise.⑥you can have Chinese food or wesrern food.⑦The cafe with the coffee and the tea equipped has a great intention of inviting you.⑧you can drink tea or coffee.⑨Our swimming pool will give you a good service all day and free of charge. ⑩We wait for you here.
一、培养学生掌握基本句型是夯实基础的前提
写好句子是我们永远的基本功。对高中学生来说，大纲要求会用五种基本句型来表达自己的思想。这种要求应该说不是很高，但真正做到却不易。写出准确流利的英语句子，可以说是我们英语教学的最低要求，也是我们的最高追求，我们每一个学英语的人都在为此努力，这就要求我们平时应加强对学生基本功的训练。
（一）培养学生运用基础语法知识构建正确的英语句子的能力
语法是构建句子的基本规则。语法教学可以分为两个层次：
1. 基本语法教学
这些语法高中阶段看起来似乎很简单，在写作中却往往容易丢分，学生也容易忽视。
以2007年高考作文为例。比如单、复数的一致问题，“20间单人间”正确的表达是20single rooms，但大部分学生都写成了20 single room。再如主谓一致的问题，“距白山入口处500米”正确表达应该是There stands out hotel 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.有的考生却写成：There stand out hotel 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.以上几例错误的出现固然有学生粗心的原因，但也从一个侧面反映出学生基础语法的掌握不牢固。
2. 培养学生运用复杂语法的能力
如强调句型it is/was…who/that…的应用，非谓语动词to do、doing等的互换使用，only引导的倒装句的应用，定语从句的使用等。有意识地使用这些复杂语法与句法能使句式更灵活，富有变化，在书面表达中也容易成为亮点，成为分数增长点。
（二）培养学生恰当使用过渡性词汇组合句子的能力
过渡性词语在英文写作中起重要作用，它可以使文章条理清楚、逻辑严密。我们在平时教学中要让学生分类积累过渡性词汇。根据文章的结构布局和它们在其中所起的作用，灵活掌握其用法。如表时间关系过渡的词汇firsr of all、at first、second、secondly、finally is；表达地点转变的in front of、on the right、at the top/bottom of is；表解释、列举的：that is，that is to say,such as，for example，for instance，mely,first(ly)，second(1y)，third(1y)等；表比较对照的：but，while，just like，on the other hand，on the contrary，however，in spite of等；表因果关系的：because(of)，for，as，since(that)，as a result，so，therefore等；表总结陈述的：in one word，in short，generally(speaking)，obviously,as above等。这些过渡性词语的恰当使用，可以增强语段的层次感和连贯性。
当然，掌握基本的语法后应该能写出不错的文章，但是还应该让文章增辉闪光。这就需要注意句式的使用和多变了。我们意识到句子表意功能具有多样性：意义不变，句式可以变化。因此，在意义(信息)一定的情况下，我们可以培养学生使用不同的句式表达。下面我们以2007年高考作文为例，给出三个不同样式，并且给每一个样式里句子编号，让读者在对比阅读中感受到不同句式的不同表达效果。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
A version:
①Baishan Mountain Hotel is open for business.②Out hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.③It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms,all with hot showers. ④A single room is 100 yuan and a double room is 150 yuan for one night.⑤You are advised to book in advance.⑥The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and Western rood for you to choose from.⑦You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. ⑧We also have a swimming pool,which is open all day and free of charge. ⑨All are welcome!
B version:
① There stands out hotel 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.②You will spend 100 yuan staying at one of the 20 single rooms for a night,or you will spend 150 yuan stayingat one of 15 double rooms for a night,③All single rooms and double rooms have their hot showers. ④You can choose from the Chinese food and Western food that we provide for you according to your taste.⑤And you can drink tea or coffee at the cafe.⑥Our hotel has a swimming pool,which is open all day and free of charge.⑦We are glad that you will come here.
C version:
①Out hotel is 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. ②20 single rooms and 15 double rooms wait for you.③Living in a single room for a night you should pay 100 yuan for it or living in a double room for a night you should pay 150 yuan for it. ④All rooms have their own hot showers.⑤The Chinese food and western food will give you a big surprise.⑥you can have Chinese food or wesrern food.⑦The cafe with the coffee and the tea equipped has a great intention of inviting you.⑧you can drink tea or coffee.⑨Our swimming pool will give you a good service all day and free of charge. ⑩We wait for you here.