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If you want to be a polite guest at an American dinner party, you are supposed to do these things.
Firstly, you are supposed to buy a small gift such as flowers or wine to your host or hostess.
Secondly, you are supposed to arrive on time. If the dinner time is 7:00, do not arrive before 6:30 or after 7:05 without calling.
Thirdly, during dinner, be sure to praise your host or hostess for the meal. After you finish to eat, you are not supposed to stay too long, but it’s not polite to leave immediately either.
Finally, you are supposed to thank your host or hostess for the dinner when you leave.
点评
1. 优点：
本习作是一篇很成功的作品。小作者在充分运用提示的基础上，合理发挥，具体说明了去美国人家做客时应注意的事项。文章意思连贯，并成功地运用了时间状语从句、条件状语从句和be supposed to do sth句型。
2. 需要修改的地方：
① 将to改为 for。buy与for连用，表示“为……买……”。
② 将to eat改为eating。finish后接动词-ing形式作宾语，表示“做完某事”。
3. 评分：
按照中考英语作文满分15分的标准，本文修改前可得13分。
本期点评名师
李福荣 男，1967年生，大学本科，中学一级教师。山东省汶上县教学能手、汶上县优秀教师。教学之余，笔耕不辍，主编《英语奥林匹克》(2008年版)、《英语奥林匹克》(2009年版) 、《中考英语语法过关训练》等8部教学教辅书籍。在省级和国家级期刊上发表论文600余篇，多次受到县委和县政府的表彰。
Firstly, you are supposed to buy a small gift such as flowers or wine to your host or hostess.
Secondly, you are supposed to arrive on time. If the dinner time is 7:00, do not arrive before 6:30 or after 7:05 without calling.
Thirdly, during dinner, be sure to praise your host or hostess for the meal. After you finish to eat, you are not supposed to stay too long, but it’s not polite to leave immediately either.
Finally, you are supposed to thank your host or hostess for the dinner when you leave.
点评
1. 优点：
本习作是一篇很成功的作品。小作者在充分运用提示的基础上，合理发挥，具体说明了去美国人家做客时应注意的事项。文章意思连贯，并成功地运用了时间状语从句、条件状语从句和be supposed to do sth句型。
2. 需要修改的地方：
① 将to改为 for。buy与for连用，表示“为……买……”。
② 将to eat改为eating。finish后接动词-ing形式作宾语，表示“做完某事”。
3. 评分：
按照中考英语作文满分15分的标准，本文修改前可得13分。
本期点评名师
李福荣 男，1967年生，大学本科，中学一级教师。山东省汶上县教学能手、汶上县优秀教师。教学之余，笔耕不辍，主编《英语奥林匹克》(2008年版)、《英语奥林匹克》(2009年版) 、《中考英语语法过关训练》等8部教学教辅书籍。在省级和国家级期刊上发表论文600余篇，多次受到县委和县政府的表彰。