李超同学: 你寄来的小小说习作《一块馍渣子》我们看了。可能这是你亲身经历的生活的写照,从主题看,它还是有积极意义的,提出了一个言传身教的问题。但从技巧上看就显得很一般化了,平铺直叙,事物按常理的逻辑发展,因此就缺乏感染力。那么怎样增强小小说的感染力,取得出奇 Li Chao students: You send a small novel for “a piece of slag” we read. Probably this is a portrayal of your personal life experience. From the perspective of the subject, it still has positive meaning and raises a question of precept and example. But from a technical point of view it seems very generalized, straightforward to lay, logical development of things according to common sense, so the lack of appeal. So how to enhance the appeal of the novel, made surprising