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有专家认为,最能丰满人物形象与表现人物性格的,莫过于心理描写。不过,作文时最难出彩的也是心理描写。从同学们的作文来看,有的文章满足于情节的波澜起伏,却忽视了人物内心的刻画;有的文章片面追求人物形象的高大,刻画心理时又脱离了生活实际。概括地讲,就是重视心理描写的作用,却没有掌握描写出彩的技巧。我们不妨先来看一下《深夜柔情》里的这个失误片断。看到我辛苦的身影,妈妈有些心痛。她走到我身后,问我累不累。烦的是,我正在为一道题目而绞尽脑汁,刚想出一点头绪,却被妈妈打断思路。
Some experts believe that the most bustling figure and performance character, than the psychological description. However, the most difficult when writing essay is also a psychological description. From the students’ essay, some articles are satisfied with the ups and downs of the plot, but they ignore the characterization of the characters. Some articles pursue one-sidedly the tall image of the characters and depict the reality of life when portraying the psychology. In a nutshell, it is to emphasize the role of psychological description, but did not grasp the description of color skills. We might as well take a look at the slightest mistake in Late-night tenderness. Mom saw a little sad when I saw my hard figure. She came behind me and asked me not tired. Annoyingly, I was racking my brains for a problem, just came up with a clue, but was interrupted by my mother.