新课标建议我们“写作教学应贴近学生生活实际,让学生易于动笔,乐于表达,教师要激发学生对生活的热爱,调动学生观察思考和练笔的积极性,要引导学生写熟悉的人、事、景物,做到说真话,表达真情实感……”。为了达到这些要求,我曾在作文教学中耗费不少功夫用来指导、批改和讲评,但效果都不是很理想。而学生的日记却比作文的内容写得真实,在一定程度上能表达出学生真实而朴素的感情。 The new curriculum suggests that we “writing teaching should be close to the actual student life, so that students easy to write, be happy to express, teachers should stimulate students love of life, mobilize students’ observation and practice pen enthusiasm, to guide students to write familiar people, things , Scenery, to be honest, to express true feelings ... ”. In order to meet these requirements, I spent a lot of effort in teaching writing to guide, criticize and comment, but the results are not very satisfactory. The diary of a student is more realistic than the essay content, to a certain extent, can express the students’ real and simple feelings.