【案例描述】小何老师要参加县教研室组织的青年教师习作教学比武活动,作为同事兼好朋友的我们,自始至终参与了小何老师的比武课打磨。小何老师执教的是小学三年级命题作文《我喜欢的小动物》。他设计的习作训练目标是“了解动物的特点,学习怎样抓住特点;具体有序地描写动物的外形,真实有趣地描述动物的习性”;习作教学的重点和难点是“把动物的外 [Case description] Teacher Xiao He wants to participate in the teaching activities of young teachers organized by the County Teaching and Research Office. As a colleague who is a good friend, he has been participating in the training contest of Mr. Xiao. What little teacher is coaching the third grade primary school thesis composition ”I like the little animal.“ He designed the training goal is to ”learn about the characteristics of animals, learn how to seize the characteristics of the orderly description of the animal's shape, the true and interesting description of the habits of animals,“ the focus of learning and teaching is ”the animals Outside