这是初中一年级下学期一次命题作文的讲评课,作文题目是《我在文明礼貌月中》。讲评采取课堂讨论的方式,全班学生围绕事先印发并经过分头批改的一篇中等水平的作文,交流心得体会。这篇作文主要写“我”在雷锋精神指引下,一个月里,坚持步行上学,省下车钱,献款抢救大熊猫的经过;同时还 This is the first semester of junior high school next semester essay commentary class, essay title is “I am in the midst of civilized manners.” The lectures were taken in class discussions and the classmates exchanged ideas on a medium-level piece of writing that had been pre-printed and partially revised. This writing is mainly written in “I” under the guidance of the spirit of Lei Feng, a month, adhere to walking to school, save money, sacrifice panda rescue; at the same time